Saturday, July 25, 2020

Killing Characters More Than Once


The Internet cut out some time on Friday when the storm was battering town (I was out of the house until about 6:30 or so), so for the first time in a while, this Saturday Note is being written in Microsoft Word instead of a Google Doc.

So that’s a fun fact for you.

I’m sorry that the Book Diary hasn’t been updated as frequently; because of my busyness right now, which I kind of hope will be a permanent fixture, I haven’t been reading as much. But I have been reading in the mornings, and on lunch breaks, so expect to see some stuff added occasionally, though mostly on weekends.

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On Killing the Same Characters

You know it’s kind of annoying when it’s the same characters who keep getting killed.

To be clear, I’m not talking about one character who keeps getting killed as a kind of joke, or that’s his superpower or something. We’re not talking about South Park’s Kenny (although to be clear, we’re almost never talking about South Park; I don’t watch it). We’re talking about a character who, for dramatic purposes, is killed more than once. And it’s supposed to be dramatic every time it happens.

For instance, Supernatural was a bit difficult to take seriously when it came to death, because so many characters had died and come back. The two leads had come back multiple times. Season five actually played with this surprisingly effectively though—when Sam is told that he’s going to be possessed by Lucifer, Sam threatens to kill himself, and Lucifer just says he’ll bring him back. Likewise, there’s an episode that begins with Sam and Dean being killed, and the Plot consists of their travels through the afterlife, trying to get an audience with a specific angel while trying to avoid being brought back until they can achieve it.

But after that, it became increasingly difficult to take death as a dramatic turn of the Plot. Part of this was because the show was supposed to end after five seasons and then just didn’t so the story kind of meandered along. But it was annoying when someone threatens Sam or Dean, and we’re supposed to, y’know, care, because after all, they’ve come back from being killed so many times. The drama just doesn’t work.

Agents of SHIELD just pulled a variation of this with one of its recent supporting characters (some spoilers ahead). There’s this alien robot guy, Enoch, who has been around for hundreds of thousands of years. He becomes friends with the main characters. In season five, in the time travel plot, at one point he sacrifices himself to save our heroes. Except then the timeline gets rewritten, and he’s alive again. Yay! But in the currently-airing season seven, he just got killed again, sacrificing his life to save our heroes in a way that’s not too dissimilar, which is played for drama again. Except… we already had this scenario go down.

It's hard to take a character death seriously, when we’ve already gone through this exact same scenario in this continuity. We’ve seen this character die, and we didn’t think we’d see him again. And him popping up again was a pleasant surprise! But now he’s dying again, and… it just doesn’t feel as strong of a dramatic point, because we’ve already lost him once to get him back. Furthermore, the show’s provided us with plenty of ways for him to come back—we’ve seen others of his species preserve themselves through brain uploads. So when he’s dying, and we’re not given any explanation as to why he doesn’t just do that… it kind of falls flat.

Another Marvel example: do you remember in Infinity War, at the beginning, when Thanos kills Loki? And do you remember how basically none of us believed it? Not as in, “We were so shocked we couldn’t believe it!” It was more like, “Yeah, I refuse to believe this isn’t some other trick.” Because Loki had died! And had a really dramatic death scene! And to be clear, I’m not sure if we believed it in The Dark World either, but then another death scene? Of course we didn’t buy it. We knew that this character had a habit of cheating death. So unless you did something extreme, like had his head ripped off and put on a spike, I don’t think any of us would have bought it. And even then, we probably would ask for someone to check a pulse or something.

Honestly, Loki’s death scene in Infinity War didn’t mean anything other than the directors looking at the audience and saying, “We don’t really care about any of the good parts of Thor: Ragnarok.”

If you are a writer, and you have a fakeout death scene (whether because the death is a ruse, or because the character comes back from being dead), you can’t turn around and have that character killed later on, or even in the next film, and expect it to play as well. It feels cheap. And it feels like some sort of trick, like either we don’t’ believe it, or we don’t think it’ll work as well. When death becomes a cheap way to milk drama, then you’ve got to come up with some other dramatic stakes for the story.

Don’t know what, precisely, but death for the same character more than once won’t cut it.

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